I love your background details. It makes the scene alive, immediately visible.

…n’t understand,” he would answer. With his slim figure bent forward, he was still towering over her. Someone would pass by them at this moment — an old man taking his evening walk, a group of noisy teenagers, a mother and her child going back home after a birthday party — and the curious glances thrown in their direction would serve as a retort to John’s words. How come…
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Nevena Pascaleva
Arpad Nagy
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Feb 13, 2024
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I love your background details. It makes the scene alive, immediately visible.
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Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.
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