Arpad Nagy
Jan 19, 2025

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Nice, quick build-up of tension. Great descriptions. I had two questions, though: Where did the flashlight come from, and who called the police?

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Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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