Arpad Nagy
Mar 31, 2024

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Okay. I liked the writing, but not so much the message. The view of Heaven here is rather pessimistic and of Hell quite utopian, and I do have a problem with that, aside with other issues, one being the Satan craves followers in the same manner as the one above. It is, however a work of fiction so full points for creativity.

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Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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