Oooh! I love how you completed this opening setting! The small pockets...very good!

…he frosty bench, she pulled her thin coat tighter against the icy wind, her bare hands red and raw. Blowing on them helped, for a second. She jammed her hands in her pockets hoping to find at least one mitten hiding from her. No such luck. The pockets — barely big enough for her hands — were too shallow to hide anything more than a crumpled tissue.
Talking to an Owl on a Snowy Morning
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Marilyn Flower
Arpad Nagy
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Aug 7, 2024
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Oooh! I love how you completed this opening setting! The small pockets...very good!
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Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.
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