Arpad Nagy
May 15, 2022

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So, that one Father made the same mistake 871 times? I would consider that a suitable amendment.
I’m still haven’t warmed to the changes in the liturgy.

I liked this

Lord, I am not worthy to receive you, but only say the word and I shall be healed."

I like this less;

, "Lord, I am not worthy that you should enter under my roof, but only say the word and my soul shall be healed."

Likewise with the change to
“And also with you,
to
and with your spirit.

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Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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