Thanks, PJ. I don't think so. Funny thing about this story. I was in a frenzy of writing, I was sending out about a submission every two days to off platform magazines while working on freelance stuff and writing for Medium. I couldn't even recall writing this lol. When it came back, I was like "what the hell is this about?"

I don't think it's very good, or original enough to warrant further effort. More or less, it's practice on my flash fiction.