That was excellent! Fantastic, descriptive sentences, lucid imagery, and a good story.

…s she going to make it? She can’t possibly go on another hour feeling this way. Spent. Disintegrated. A dried-up rose. Her words trapped in a mouth that cannot speak. Her mind imprisoned and dried by a disturbing sens…
Closed Door and Curveballs
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Elena dL
Arpad Nagy
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Aug 31, 2024
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That was excellent! Fantastic, descriptive sentences, lucid imagery, and a good story.
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Written by Arpad Nagy3.5K Followers
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Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.
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