Arpad Nagy
Dec 12, 2024

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This was a tough prompt for me. I got 3/4 through two stories but liked neither. I wasn't sure about your opening, following the prompt but I like how you brought it back later on.

I had thought Benny knew he would killed and the final clue would lead her to solving his death.

Good job.

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Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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