Arpad Nagy
Oct 13, 2024

Very good. I like how Maeve isn't entirely ethical herself. Nice balance to the madness with Paul's objectiveness and having her try on the shoe on the other foot.

Nicole is going to be a surprise. She's capable, and at her age, unpredictable.

You have the story building nicely.

Arpad Nagy
Arpad Nagy

Written by Arpad Nagy

Shortlisted for 2024 Northwind Writing Award in NF/Fiction. New owner of First Line Fiction. Editor @ The Memoirist, AoE, Book Cafe, Short Place, Kitchen Tales.

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